Revising essay due after 7hrs

The feedback:

 

– I found your essay to be a vast improvement this time around, but there are still things missing that should be addressed when you revise this essay for the portfolio. Grammar like always needs to be looked at and fixed. I also want to see you use your more sources and rely on your sources more in your revision of this paper. I also want you to talk more about the importance of the space and how the space itself is defining the purpose and area in which people are experiencing.

 

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