essay edit 12

here is an essay that need to edit, just follow the comments in this essa

Highlight significant changes/additions

Please highlight in yellow all the significant changes you made—these will be mostly additions, since my most important comments to most of you were to explain more, expand, give context, introduce quotes, or otherwise develop ideas.

Endnote

At the very end of your essay, after your works cited page, write a paragraph summarizing the types of changes you made and reflect on how you think your essay is improved; one way to approach this reflection is by explaining what you learned about essay writing from the process on this essay. This is also a good place to explain to me smaller but important changes I might not see as easily. In this endnote, you should write most of a page, double-spaced.

 
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