english editing paraphrase and smoothen the sentence
I wrote a research paper about ‘the asymmetrical gender revolution ‘, but many sentences are copied from other articles, and some sentences are informal.
Therefore, I need some help of
ðŸ“1. Paraphrase some paragraphs. (about 1300 words)
ðŸ“2. Smoothen the sentence into more academic style. (about 1000 words)
💡 I have marked ‘which help do I need’ in every paragraph.
Some paragraphs need to be paraphrased, some only need to be smoothen.
The essay is in the attachment.
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