english editing paraphrase and smoothen the sentence

I wrote a research paper about ‘the asymmetrical gender revolution ‘, but many sentences are copied from other articles, and some sentences are informal.

Therefore, I need some help of
📍1. Paraphrase some paragraphs. (about 1300 words)

📍2. Smoothen the sentence into more academic style. (about 1000 words)

💡 I have marked ‘which help do I need’ in every paragraph.
Some paragraphs need to be paraphrased, some only need to be smoothen.

The essay is in the attachment.
10% -18% tips will be add for excellent work!

 
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